Kia ora! I like how you showed us what you are still working on and what you have finished. This makes me remember my blog posts about my work maybe next time you could write a bit more.
I like that you started your entry by saying that you were going to tell us about your learning. I like knowing what I’m about to read! Did you do this writing task? I can’t wait to see what words you think of!
I liked how your started off by saying what you were going to talk about. I wonder if you could remember to put your writing into sentences by using full stops and capital letters. Remember that when you talk about yourself you use a capital letter. I look forward to reading your next blog. From Mrs A
Kia ora! I like how you showed us what you are still working on and what you have finished. This makes me remember my blog posts about my work maybe next time you could write a bit more.
ReplyDeleteHey Serafina!
ReplyDeleteI like that you started your entry by saying that you were going to tell us about your learning. I like knowing what I’m about to read! Did you do this writing task? I can’t wait to see what words you think of!
FROM MrsA @ NWS
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Serafina
I liked how your started off by saying what you were going to talk about. I wonder if you could remember to put your writing into sentences by using full stops and capital letters. Remember that when you talk about yourself you use a capital letter. I look forward to reading your next blog. From Mrs A